INFANT MORTALITY

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No buggy-pushing for you, my son

It’s done. You’re dead.

26 days we had you

Saw you. Felt you. Touched you.

And I am snake-bitten

Clouded and red

For all crumbles under you.

Shadow-fall

Penumbra: winter tree

Stripped.

Rain-shine on our time

You darling boy. So hard born, I sang.

Now even your blanket-smell has gone.

Nobody mentions you.

Kieran Sean Jack.

What else can I do for you?

No nursery-rhymes.

No golden times.

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John Marks

Wed 9th Aug 2017 00:21

You are very kind Cynthia and much appreciated for your delicacy, as opposed to my severity. I have had this poem in my mind for 28 years.

John

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Tue 8th Aug 2017 19:48

This is hard reading, blunt and severe, and very effective. I like the hard honesty of it, and the lovely line like 'now even your blanket-smell has gone' and 'What else can I do for you?'

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