FALSE ECONOMY
High five to us guy’s
Fly guy’s
Up in the sky guy’s
The wise guy’s
The bring n buy guy’s
Smarter than you guy’s
Can’t see my eye’s guy’s
Cos we bin tellin lie’s guy’s
Tellin you what to buy guy’s
Gone from medium to large guy’s
Form eatin too many pie’s guy’s
Hiddin behind technology foolin you psychology
Collaboration huniliation
Coverin billboard’s station to station
In this faster than light fake nation
So he work’s wit her and she work’s wit dem
Now she is a he but sound’s like a she and the really boss thing is they all work for ME
Drum n bass,Gun n case,Gangster rap
Just the same old crap,never face to face
All them gym bunny’s working their ab’s
Impressin their chic’s payin their tab’s
Ya can’t save em now Marshall
The,ve milked the cash cow
Crapped on their own
Rapped but never grown
Put hope in the mind’s of the poor
Yet they still push their daughter out the door To be a god damn crack whore
Can’t do jack on their own
Their cover’s bin blown
Thrown seed’s that turned to
Now NO Home No Crust
Remenissin bout dem bad old day’s
Gettin cuffed for ya bad ol way’s
Spellin school wit a K to stay alive Tellin joke’s about Jo’s who work 9 to 5
Got 14 kid’s and 9 wive’s
Have a god givin right to ruin live’s
But it’s all got to come to an end
When ya fake made up voice’s
Takin ya time waitin in line
Stick to the knife
Part o ya kife
Got the wrong name for the wrong wife
She does’nt care she’s doin her hair
Look’s like a peach wit a hint of pear
Listen to tune’s - lift’s from suicide to just plain low
Obama didn’t care enough to bring “Obama Care”
The crumb of consolation is the hope that we may grow
Into folk who will eventually start to say NO.
Jane C. Steele
Fri 11th Aug 2017 18:24
I like the poem but am distracted by the 's
You have put 's continually for plurals. For instance - lie's guy's should be
lies guys - no apostrophe needed.
Also, the ' in doesn't comes between the n and t to show the o is missing.
Hope you don't mind me pointing this out, but the poem doesn't make sense grammatically as it stands.
Cheers