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Finn

Finn

I stare at the sun, the moon, fuck it! Let’s just say the sky
Grab the wheel and hit the sand after losing a year
I saw you not so long ago but that was not here
Every thought that doesn’t include you is a good one
I took it up so high and you came down so low
You knew it true when you asked for life and I completely let go
Was it to much
Is it too much
Are we too much
What is too much

Towering sun beat upon my face and everything’s so clear
Her majesty the sea sings songs to me

 

-ac 2016

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Emer Ni Chorra

Fri 18th Aug 2017 10:15

Beautiful.

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Eseosa

Fri 18th Aug 2017 10:15

VERY STRONG POEM?

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David Taylor-Jones

Fri 18th Aug 2017 09:01

'her majesty the sea sings songs to me' - beautiful phrase ?

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