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a stranger--

 

prewritten but

incongruent

 

to these lines

that shape me...

 

A flagrant

misconstruance

 

of my humanity

is the life

they gave--

 

my birth, only

anathema to me.

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◄ hindsight (a late proto-proverbial observation)

HAHAHA--it's only blood you silly nurse (or, more serious reflections upon M. Python's Holy Grail) ►

Comments

elPintor

Wed 23rd Aug 2017 01:42

Really, Martin and David, you'll have to pardon me. I've been so preoccupied with work, and so forth, that I haven't had the presence of mind to comment.

I'm not sure that it matters, but this is about agendas and how they are somehow pressed upon us without our express permission, and much outside of our personal choice--circumstance is much a matter of chance and should never be judged by an outsider who lacks a full understanding.


Anyhow, thanks for reading.

Rachel

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Martin Elder

Sun 20th Aug 2017 09:57

I love the both the shape and the flow of this piece Rachel
Nice one

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