I Was Born With Too Many Echoes
This is a really old one. Think I was about nineteen when I wrote it...But it's not bad.
I WAS BORN WITH TOO MANY ECHOES
I was born with too many echoes
like a cave dark and resounding
waves come through me and drench me
in their shuddering fall
and you say explain if you will
your sudden silences
your strange dreams
and the mad hot rushing tears
at the moment when my heart
is breaking with love for you
and fear
and sorrow
and pain
I borrow my words from a world unknown
to this empty space I call my home
I was born with too many echoes
like a cave dark and resounding
waves come through me
drench me
in their shuddering fall
and you say let me hold you
let me kiss you
let me hold back the devouring night
and let me love you now
in the morning it’ll be allright
at the moment when my heart
is breaking with love for you
trembling on the edge of a wave
drowning memories
let me hold you against the night
and let me lie helpless
against the bruising of the sea
I was born with too many echoes
a cave dark and resounding
waves coming through me
drench us in their shuddering
and you say explain if you will
your sudden silences and your empty stare
how you touch me without touching
and the mad hot rushing tears
at the moment when my heart
is breaking with love for you
and fear
and sorrow
and pain
echoes of an older world
rolling around our helpless flesh
Andy N
Wed 23rd Aug 2017 12:45
great title Karen.
poem stands up well too.
good write x