Will Time bring me
what my heart desires most,
and will it free the dreams
that beg to be heard?
A castle of a world
sways away from my door,
and there is still no door to unlock.
But I hold the key.
It is nothing but a weight,
but it no longer drowns me.
It is now a heavy hope
to step through the stage
and into the light
that I yearn to feel.
It is the promise
to release my dreams from within.
Yet, I still hold the key.
Will Time wait for me?
Will it allow me to find the road
that I need
through the castle
and help me find a way?
There are no answers
but worry and hope.
There is no future
because white is the only color
that I still see.
What can I do
but continue to
hold the key?
<Deleted User> (4281)
Thu 27th Dec 2007 05:53
Hello Melissa- Nice meeting you. Excellent write. Keeps the reader thinking of your next move. It gives room to expend your desires.
"There is no future
because white is the only color
that I still see.
What can I do
but continue to
hold the key?"
I like the dreamy type of writing. Thank you for sharing...All the best in the New Year Melissa!
Zuzanna Musial