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We Are Them

 

     They are poor old creatures washed up from the sea
-best not look- or might they be waiting...
who can say... the last word of the comedy
     to hurl themselves through the waves, and end it?
Either way nothing to do with us.
One tries a word-search puzzle, one drifts off in the shade.
     The ebb and the flow
          a gentle tide plays.

     We accompany ourselves with great fanfare
lithe and spilled all over bare sand
like angels free of care or guidance.
     Caught at the edge of our vision the poor creatures
are poor versions of ourselves.
By puzzling summer's resolution we apprehend
      ourselves more clearly-
          poor versions of them.

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Thu 31st Aug 2017 16:21

Much enjoyed. Deep and challenging. The title is brilliant, in itself a superb metaphor.

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keith jeffries

Wed 30th Aug 2017 10:51

Hello Adam, This poem probes the human psyche in terms of our place in the created order and challenges us to think more of our nature as participants in a great endeavour. Thank you again for this. Keith

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