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Closed Windows

I've heard it said

that when it rains it pours;

but that when life closes a window,

it's to open up new doors.

And yet, in spite of what's ahead

I fear my heart's holding me back.

I do not wish to go through doors

when all I see is black.

The colors that I used to see

so vivid and so bright,

I now know are the cruelest lies

when brought into the light.

It seems the pieces of my heart

I gave away are all but lost.

Frozen behind closed windows

where the sunlight turned to frost.

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Eric Maynard

Sun 22nd Oct 2017 15:28

I appreciate the theme of someone who is reluctant to pass through an open door. It stands the convention of "progress" and success on it's head, and forces the reader to consider what it means to refuse an invitation, and why we might. Thank you for sharing.

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