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COULD IT BE

Life throws us around

surrounds us with confusion

 

The puzzles untwist 

showing a list of could be's

 

They reveal themselves...

 

Could it be

 

That I have

walked into the magic place

of paradise

 

For there he is 

the one that I was looking for

the one that was looking for me

 

Could it be

 

This was meant to be

just as it was

 

The ups and downs

the joy and frowns

 

Melting and molding

us into what we were to

become

 

Could it be

 

We will finally be free

to unleash the passion 

deep in our hearts

 

Depart from the pain

walk out of the rain

 

Into eternal sunshine

 

Could it be?

 

By Lynn Hahn

 

 

 

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<Deleted User> (18118)

Fri 29th Sep 2017 17:54

The hope that can be renewed at any time. Enjoyed this one.

Hannah

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lynn hahn

Fri 29th Sep 2017 17:21

Thank you Cynthia. Yes learning from the past is why "Could it be" was the theme. Hope springs eternal and that is just about it... Hope. So agree with you my friend but wouldn't it be great if eternal sunshine "could be" true?

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Fri 29th Sep 2017 10:36

Much appreciated.

The final 'thought' made me gasp with a little pain; it was the word 'eternal'. Made me want to say 'Not likely!' And I felt mean-spirited, when the 'writer' was trying to be so positive. And I'm thinking: 'She hasn't learned a thing from past experience.'

Therefore, a good poem, embracing a very important theme.

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