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Marianne, please don't take this as a negative criticism, but I don't get it. I've tried and tried to understand what you are trying to say but I can't break it down. It sounds like a Bob Dylan song lyric, very clever but indecipherable. I'm feeling pretty uncool and very thick.
Really good, Marianne, full of imagination expressed in outstanding images and provocative depths. I enjoyed it greatly.
Please check 'whose nuance' while the poem is 'up front' so to speak.
Astonishing. Love it.
John
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winston plowes
Thu 29th Oct 2009 23:23
Powerful. Challenging.
Lessons of loss
loosens me, to the dot
of somebody's pupil
blinking me away.
Is a fantastic segment of words.
And now the TV dies and everyone stands for the national anthem. The BBC is closing down.
win