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Horror

 

It's hardly a matter of going into the wood
more a matter of not leaving it;
       children, stay away from the edge.
Hitting the concrete means death,
and should you hear the iron shriek
       please move deeper if you can.
Our growing understanding 
of towers putting trees in the shade
       spreads a dread of becoming 
petrified by the horror, and those unable 
to return with their story we mourn 
       in perpetuity.

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◄ Mulling It Over And Over

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Sun 8th Oct 2017 12:27

Very compelling. I'm not sure I understand all of it, but enough to feel it strongly. Superficially, I did think of the dreadful technical accidents at 'Entertainment Parks'; but that may be way off-track.

I've never seen 'Into the Woods'. So I may be missing a major cultural idea. But I think the poem stands alone, without referencing anything else.

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