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Light

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That moment of letting go 

So much hurt 

Heavy on my mind

Heavy in my heart 

Aches in my back from the load

I opened up and shared a past 

Shared a heartache 

Shared a pain 

As difficult as it was...it was my truth 

A piece of me that wanted peace 

I can be 

I can find me 

I can breathe 

And I can live 

Saying hello to happy 

Saying goodbye to that pain

Finding my light 

 

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◄ Love is beautiful

He does It for me ►

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Wardah

Wed 25th Oct 2017 22:08

Lovely poem Saniya?

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Jon

Tue 24th Oct 2017 18:04

Hi Saniya
Well crafted poem...I especially love the line " I can be ,I can find me, I can breathe and I can live."
A real sense of hope here.
Well done

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