We're all a bit lost
Waiting to be found
Trying to find ourselves
Which path to take...
Which relationship to forsake...
What's real and what's fake...
Can't I just drown you in a lake
Shake you awake
Wrap you in my comforting embrace
We're all tired of this limbo
This confusion we've fallen into
This cycle we're stuck in
Let's all just say what we mean
Take the chances when they come
Move forward in this life
Sick of this pointless strife
Well, I laughed outright, so it must have spoken to me too.
'Can't I just drown you in a lake' is one of the best lines I've seen in ages. I'm praying you're not serious - just poking fun at yourself, as we all need to do sometimes. And poetry is such a great outlet, both your own and the works of others.
Also: 'Which relationship to forsake' - hilarious!
JEEZ, I really hope you are trying to be funny. And I'm not 'making fun' of your efforts.
Ryn
Thu 26th Oct 2017 02:05
So good...it really spoke to me
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Wardah
Fri 27th Oct 2017 18:44
Thanks Cynthia. ? its not to be taken literally at all but in all honesty I was trying really hard not to laugh out loud in the dead of night when I wrote it.
I was just expressing frustration with a few friendships/situations. I'm not even in a relationship ?
Glad you liked it I had a good chuckle writing it and reading it still makes me smile.
Looking forward to reading your work.
And thanks Ryn I'm glad you liked it as well?