Raking up the past
Dew bejewelled spider webs span the handle
of the broken wooden fork
propped in the dirt like a cross for the fallen.
Khaki leaves scatter the garden but the bright Acer
still wears its scarlet uniform.
The shrill of a panicking blackbird’s pinking
pierces the steady scrunch of leaves decaying
while the slowly scouring scrape
of my rake across the sticky wet ground
disturbs the softly sweet scent
of those same dying leaves.
The rough wooden handle of my rake shakes
as I drag the tines across the ground
trying to tidy the fallen and to
order the unruly parade of grubby gravel
from which a few bold soldiers
jump for freedom into my deck shoes.
The taste of those relentlessly fading leaves
sits fatly on my tongue
like all the words I never spoke,
while the pebbles in my shoes
remind me to walk on the ghosts
of summer with care.
David Taylor-Jones
Sat 10th Feb 2018 23:03
Thanks for your comments John, it really helps to have some thoughtful feedback. David