A Little Bit More
A Little Bit More
Mam’s sunk another quid on it
She saw her reflection in the plastic dispenser
A pick ‘n’ mix of promises
Laid out before her
This time she’d have to win, ‘right kids’?
She’s got this lucky 2p
She uses ever so carefully
It takes off the silver foil
Tiny curls that fall to the floor
The corners and the edges first
Then just a little bit more at a time
She is fastidious about it
Every last inch has got to be scratched
Anxious anticipation niggles at her
She lets her imagination conjure up
The second look, the gasp, the celebration
The breathless ‘at last kids!’
The first two lines are gone
‘It’s looking good, kids
I’ve got two hundred grands on
That’d sort us out
A mansion and an acre of land
Come to think of it
I’m not exactly sure what an acre is
But it sounds like what posh people get
Nice and big and, and, and…..
…..nevermind kids
There’s always next time around’
Mam’s always got that one last pound
Neil West
Thu 5th Nov 2009 18:04
Hi Gemma. I enjoyed 'A little bit more', I like poems that tell a story and this one is both sad and hopeful in equal measure. I hope her last quid does pick a winner!