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Wistful @ Wittering

I've promised myself this will be my last excursion into wistfulness for a while:

 

The flat pale sand stretches away like an endlessly undulating sheet

covering the wonderful worlds of worms

who wilfully poke their tiny walnut whip casts into the afternoon sky

while I soak in the rhythmic swishing of the lazy summer low tide waves

and the boisterous conversations of the wheeling gulls.

The scents of seaweed, ozone and sun cream drift across the beach

and I feel the soft and gritty sand under the palm of my hand

and the playful tugging of a sea breeze as it brushes hair off my face

and blesses my eyelashes with fine grains

like sleep dust for a dozy afternoon’s napping grace.

On my lips there’s salt from the sea and salt from my chips

with vinegar of course, and a can of cold Coke

sits propped precariously beside my towel.

Why don’t I do that anymore?

Why don’t I make the time

for me and the sea and the tide

for that type of time that wanders away

with the worms and the gulls and the sizzling spray?

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<Deleted User> (18474)

Mon 13th Nov 2017 19:08

I was completely there with you dude. I could almost smell that vinegar. I pretty much know you knocked than can of coke over. Lol. Really liked it. Thanks. Beno

<Deleted User> (13762)

Mon 13th Nov 2017 08:49

David, can we persuade you to continue your wistful witterings? They are so very good - especially when the worms make walnut whip casts in the sand. Were you @ West Wittering? Col.

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David Taylor-Jones

Sun 12th Nov 2017 20:53

Thanks Keith ?

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keith jeffries

Sun 12th Nov 2017 18:33

David, this is full of imagery which paints a picture so clear with added thoughtfulness. Thank you. Keith

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