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Waddell Creek Beach, California, USA

 

Fiery bronze

and copper-white cliffs rise

motionless

against the mighty

oCean blue

 

Black granite sentinels stand

in anxious waters

unmarred

in austere pose

 

Restless and daring

the waters thrash

amid rock

sand and stone

whetting a wilted past

 

Blankets of worn bells

cling tightly to the black

clay bedrock

in the shadow of towering

cliffs

 

Rusting yellow grain

and slate grey pebbles

squeeze the swelling surf

fencing in the bleached remains

of whales and birds

while insects and spiders comb the

open shore

 

Age upon age

the angry sea has stood at this door

pounding

relentlessly pounding and thundering

stretching forth

icy blue tendrils

 

 

Desperate to hold again

lively green pillows

atop the towering cliffs

 

 

Drop after drop

wave upon wave

year after year

the mighty

oCean blue

has shed pride-filled tears

evidence of a regaled past

exposed

 

In the cool salty air

 

Tide pools remain

 

remnants

 

of a warrior ocean captured

claimed in the crevices

and conyons

of gentle granite lawns

 

urchin and anemone linger

in languid pools neither bruised

nor battered

unfazed

by the violent beast

 

Pacific

 

sandpipers

with their snowy white

underbellies

and dainty talons

scamper along the surf

 

darting

and dancing

as the sea flails

beneath

 

like a

dream whose

dawn

has finally

come

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Comments

<Deleted User> (13762)

Wed 15th Nov 2017 08:29

thanks for the response Eric. I like the idea of starting with something big and working down to the tiny and then making the tiny appear bigger than the big. Sounds like a good writing exercise. Cheers, Col.

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Eric G. Hoff

Tue 14th Nov 2017 21:20

Hi Colin, Thanks for reading and commenting. San Diego to Orcas Island? That must have been a really wonderful trip. I hope you got lots of pictures - that is such a beautiful coast all the way up.

The elephant seals are truly a magnificent blessing there at Ano Nuevo.

The reasoning for the big "C" in ocean? I just thought it to be a play on attitude. The Pacific being a beast, it thinks highly of itself, but, in reality it is like the rest of us - a small part of this great big world. That's why I play with the structure of the poem as well. It starts out big and slowly succumbs to the energy around it to where even a dainty sandpiper is bigger than the waves lapping at the shore.

Thank you again, Colin, for your kind words. I do hope you get to visit the West Coast again.

Peace

Eric

<Deleted User> (13762)

Tue 14th Nov 2017 08:49

I think I must have passed this beach some years back Eric but the summer sea mist somewhat spoiled in places our road trip from San Diego all the way up to Orcas Island off Washington state. There were plenty of highlights though, particularly the colony of elephant seals further down the coast.

Your poem is a vivid evocation of that landscape with some splendid imagery thrown in for good measure. I particularly like the 'Age upon age' verse. It's good to take time and sit and observe the landscapes we inhabit. Even better when there is no pesky Pacific mist to shroud it! Big Sur was certainly ethereal but it would have been nice to have seen the bigger picture too. Another time hopefully.

Out of curiosity, is there a reason for spelling oCean this way?

All the very best, Colin.

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