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Miss Proteus

I, the irritated aborigine,

stalk my flank with your appetite, with a hair of bulrush

as permanent as your map’s wind.

The two coined Berlin, and the pupil

in the roulette,

I mark your history and ambition

with a foe, melting as the wedding night

does in a lover’s hands, and a mutation

for house arrest.

I speak in brine and barks, and I whip

with keys; a resolute tempest

like the dark moons

of the heart, eclipsing amorous

pawns, shaking my scales to charge

my zodiac clothes, impenetrable once more.

No might of weapon matches my disguise,

and I am embalmed against all false flatterers.

 

Unless -

 

you choose to crumble me with a kiss

 

that cools my mirror,

 

I daresay I may fall

 

but then

you would not look to me anymore,

and in vain, I am just salty water.

◄ Cosmopolitan Suicide

A Secular Affliction ►

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winston plowes

Wed 11th Nov 2009 12:23

Another great one here Marriane. Started with a great title. 'Proteus' is such a great word. After reading the first 4 lines my mental imagery was already dancing on hot coals not being alowed to settle. Forging on, my journey became ever richer until the closing passages when the piece seemed to resolve itself, the waves calmed and my boat sank gently to a calmer if sadder place at the sea's bed. Sorry if this assessment is a bit unusual your work defies to be described in simple terms. Win x

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kealan coady

Tue 10th Nov 2009 16:22

this is great stuff, and i admire it's dark and resigned nature especially the last line. Also the isolation was worked well and did justice to the overall layout. Good stuff, looking forward to hearing more.

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