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cell

Belief 

leads me

through the trapdoor 

of

my

mind

 

into the cell

 

No walls

save for my 

own convictions 

 

Life fed

through 

a hatch in

the 

closed 

door 

 

to freedom

 

No bars

save for 

myself

 

Sentence

to solitary 

within the

convictions

of

my

 

Own mind

 

🌷(6)

◄ to be a lamb

beautiful grave ►

Comments

DESMOND CHILDS

Wed 29th Nov 2017 21:53

Thank you Rose and Keith for your comments much appreciated

All the best des

<Deleted User> (9882)

Wed 29th Nov 2017 18:00

and not easy at all to escape from Des.

bitter food for thought without doubt.

cheers matey





Rose ?

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keith jeffries

Wed 29th Nov 2017 09:10

Desmond, few people could articulate this as well as you have in this poem. I shall ponder on its content for some time to come. Thank you. Keith

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