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Let that go..

 

"The time" I let it go free...

And it never comes back to me..

But I wait until eternity...

May be there's a hope to get it back to see...

 

The time passes by me...

As I sit silently to watch the departing waves of the sea..

I ask myself "was the sacrifice worth it?"

My heart replies "let it go from your mind as you have allowed it to flee"...

 

I can somehow feel a lot better now...

I can sense the ocean of thoughts within me..

I can feel my heart is a wide selfless land inside...

It's free from earthly desires, it's some kind of a barren field to me...

 

 

 

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Comments

Sandeep Das

Tue 12th Dec 2017 18:46

I feel a heaven like peace in my mind when read these words...

Big Sal

Sat 9th Dec 2017 18:58

Sometimes things that are the most difficult to attain are also worth the most. Peace of mind is priceless. Good poem here.

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