A Day in the Life
Wakened to the morning hush,
watch the daylight slowly push
and ding goes the phonio.
Breathing out and wafting by
motors on the roadway sigh
and ding goes the phonio.
Up our noses poison fumes
come seeping in our little rooms
and ding goes the phonio.
Source and cause of endless marvel
constant is our carnival
and ding goes the phonio.
Round a thinking loop I creep
keeping me from dreaming sleep
and ding goes the phonio.
Welcome is the happy note,
the short distracting anecdote
of ding goes the phonio.
Big Sal
Fri 30th Nov 2018 12:40
That repetition and rhythm is subtly entrancing. Well done on conveying such a theme and carrying it in each stanza until the end.
The imagery is top notch as well.?