the Dust, the Dust
the Dust, the Dust
I remember the men,
their faces blackened with filthy coal
layers of carbon dust on skin,
slowly lining their lungs thick.
I think of them in the twilight,
two miles underground
hewing with axe and pick,
shirtless bodies glistening with sweat like morning dew
I see them coming home,
tired of the black
eyes like pissholes in the snow
unaccustomed to the light
and then,
and then their golden voices sing in Male Voice Choirs
in the softest way,
that only they,
the men of the Dust know how
and only they know how,
oh how the Dust will end their days
coughing, spluttering, heaving chest,
gasping for one last struggling final breath
and then,
and then the silence of their corroded lungs
followed by the womens' quiet tears
for another tonne of that damned black coal
one more husband, son and father is laid to rest.
Steven Dark
Thu 19th Nov 2009 14:49
Thank you Cynthia, it's always nice to 'capture' a lady even with a dark, Demonic poem :)
Chris Co, I agree with your points about the closing of the mines, sad in their own way, and the subsequent loss of community. Something I have written about in my autobiog. (Extracts on my website).
I understand what you mean by 'enjoyable' there doesn't seem to be a suitable adjective to describe the 'enjoyable' emotion one gets from something that is dark, like watching Schindler's List, Sophie's Choice or The Pianist. But I know perfectly well what you mean.
Evocative, meaningful, vivid, graphic - wow! I really am encouraged by the response so far. All I can say is that if I have any talent for writing it comes from the deep, softly lyrical rhythm of Welsh genes (although I don't speak the language - sadly).
Thanks again, your comments are very much appreciated. Sincerely.