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Revenge

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The way, she did to me
Is the way I did to her
The way, where hearts broke
The way,
I will never return to


The way where
Sun used to long last
The days spent in the past
Still, when thy feeling arises
My day neither sets, nor rises

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Douglas MacGowan

Sat 13th Jan 2018 20:45

I liked this, especially the second stanza which captures how light affects a person's emotional state.

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