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As the crow flies

Fate casts the die

As the crow flies

in my mind

The world meanders 

towards my fall

To where;

 the crow,can never fly

🌷(3)

◄ Grey Moon

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DESMOND CHILDS

Fri 19th Jan 2018 18:46

Thank you Jemima and Rose, you comments are always appreciated.



All the best des

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Fri 19th Jan 2018 15:20

nice one Des!







Rose ?

Jemima Jones

Fri 19th Jan 2018 11:35

wonderfully succinct Desmond. Thank you. Jemima.

DESMOND CHILDS

Fri 19th Jan 2018 07:28

Thank you Martin, I’m glad you like it. Very much appreciated your comments.





All the best des

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Martin Elder

Thu 18th Jan 2018 20:22

I love the simplicity of this in that you have so few words in this wonderful piece Desmond
love it

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