Ariadne\\'s Thread
Beautiful, confused, heartfelt emotion,
tinged with sadness yet filled with passion,
a longing for things that may yet be;
the beating of a lonely nervous heart
thirsty for excitment, hungry for ecstacy.
Confused by sadness, a lonely passion,
sweeps in a whirlwind unexpectedly
to destroy the emptiness.
And now? A longing for what may be,
soulful, sublime, seductive, serious
Eyes met to weave a slender thread;
two minds alike; fearful, fragile, tender, true.
A strand of hope two hearts to bind
as one in life's long and solitary night.
Two hearts, two souls, for now and ever entwined.
Cynthia Buell Thomas
Fri 27th Nov 2009 12:17
This has some good lines. There are collections of words that seem, for me, a bit excessive, and therefore not capable of expressing their individual emotive power.