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Crying

 

What silhouette fills the archway  


heavy shadow of another life's war?


What giant against the sky dominating parent


who has found you out- where you are the authority- 


here in your own dream ? Look again. 


It is the green knight reaching to fulfill his quest.


Why you, and this night?


The night papillon muses on the wall


wishful the sky be filled with colour.


How are you able to help? 


Dear little one won't you answer?


This is your dream and without you 


what is there but the icy blast 


crying through empty space?

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Sat 3rd Mar 2018 12:11

This is very interesting. Some super metaphors. 'sky dominating parent' is superb.

Check 'silhouette' since it is right in the first line, a great word that stands out.

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