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a poem for a girl i can never have unless a miracle happens

based on my mad dreams from last night after having too much beer and watching the stunning nick cage film Knowing too. this came to me and drunkenly i did it in my phone and then wrote it out. i cant ever tell the gal coz she wont wanna know. i believe we'll be together in another life. but i want her now but she not want me. such is life.

 

 

ECHO CLASS

What strange dreams I have. Of HM, of my natural world being so different, of a family of mad people being my mates then killing us, of faster than light travel. What does it mean? Has man made ships that can go to the stars? Where did he get his tech from, it has to be alien? A century of flight is too little for star travel. I’m asked to go along due to my mad dreams in my head and my writing. I guess it’ll be my job to write and I picked up what they do in my dreams. They asked me what gal I want I say HMH she’s wed though. They say no problem. I don’t ask how they do it but soon we are on a new world so far from home. For good, stranded. I must look after my new pagan bride as she teaches me to make bread. I wonder if she would like to train to be a starship pilot with me and fly an Echo Class ship? If the ships come back I’ll ask for us both. Things are good for now on our new world.

◄ a mad poem on a bus driver lol

plane poem ►

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nick armbrister

Sat 28th Nov 2009 17:52

thanx for posting. my faith is pagan so im ok on most things. this gal the poem is about taught me the meaning of true unconditional love. she broke my heart and i forgive her. im not bitter and if we never do meet i accept that. of course theres the what if...

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Francine

Sat 28th Nov 2009 15:15

Hmmm... Sometimes you just never know...
Power of positive thinking?

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Sat 28th Nov 2009 15:05

I've heard it said that marriage on earth is bound only by a certificate. A symbol if you like of fidelity and loyalty between two people.
Once fidelity and loyalty fades or is broken, in spiritual law, the certificate is no longer valid and that is the reason that it is no problem.
Humans however would see that as being totally immoral because of the religious beliefs they've come to know and follow. Man made beliefs which force us to feel guilt about anything they say is wrong. Take a leaf out of the druid faith and you will see a completely different outlook on life and love.

That's my take on this particular situation for what it's worth but please don't do anything which goes against your own truth and values.

ps. i won't be on site after this afternoon so there's no point in leaving me a reply or comment. Thanks, Janet.x

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