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John Clare Poem 1

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March.

Even now the snow lies strewn

like something forgotten

or waiting to be collected.

There, at the limits of the field,

unreached by sunlight,

clinging to the feet of

the quivering fence posts,

where I picture him,

heavy legged

and bending thin shoes on

the frozen stubble

familiar with every ruck and forrow.

Tracing, retracing,

the worn grooves of the mind

made deeper with 

every treading.

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Tom Harding

Sat 17th Mar 2018 23:08

hello both, thank you for taking the time to review and the very kind words... sorry it's taken time to respond- i've been waylaid by the flu this week. Some very kind thoughts from you both here, much appreciated.

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Tue 13th Mar 2018 11:59

Tom, for me, this is outstanding, once again. The final four lines are classic you with amazing insight of the human condition, especially of writers. WOL is really privileged to have your participation.

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Tue 13th Mar 2018 07:56

this is a delightful poem Tom and one that sends the reader off into the parts of the landscape that are overlooked and unseen from footpaths and byways. Often there is a reason we don't go there - nothing much to see but the 'limits of the field' - but there your man has found a quiet spot for contemplation and communing with nature. Marvellous. And well done on POTW btw. All the best. Col.

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