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Renaissance

 

 

Raphael’s Plato sits quietly pointing,

to later wolves, who have forgotten,

why and how to howl

At Luna’s moon tonight.

It is clear cut, wonder now is silent.

Horns now sound, in lieu of dreamy owls,

Swooping past my head.

I would that I were a blameless mouse.

Not the fool of cruel convenience.

So ashamed of all that’s dead.

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Tue 13th Mar 2018 11:00

I really like this. Thoughtful and powerful. It's so good, will you check the second line, 'who've have forgot' to see if you might say it more clearly, because I'm not at all sure what you wanted. I think you might mean 'who have forgotten'.

Always with respect.

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