Foolishness

It lies in broken pieces around us

Glass littering the floor

Like dying stars

 

Shattered

Like so many other things

I thought I could trust you with

 

You told me you were never good

At keeping things whole

And I thought you could change

 

Maybe it was my foolishness

To think you could handle

Changing the lightbulb

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◄ Lonely Rock

Empty Tunnel ►

Comments

Nruthya Johnson

Mon 2nd Apr 2018 12:15

I loved this! Was not expecting that twist towards the end. I would love to get some tips on writing this way.

Can you check out my blog?
https://blogdeadsoulmuses.blogspot.in/

<Deleted User> (13762)

Sun 1st Apr 2018 19:37

How many ex-lovers does it take to change a lightbulb?!
Nice poem Mahika and a good interpretation of the prompt.
Thanks for posting. Colin.

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