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Cockpit check

Twilight hues threw a perfect bull’s eye on the drip heavy spider’s web

that still filled a perfect pie slice on the grubby window pane,

the slow sun drew shadow shapes on the flocked chimney breast

with the fading ghosts of beech leaves and telephone poles.

I closed the door, started making quiet camp with the chairs,

nodding to my old friends the barometer, the clock

and the old metronome, that steady untocked ancestral monument,

I patiently pre-flight checked those imaginary gauges

as Surrey’s eternal gulls circled outside squalling sadly.

The angle-poise hung over my phantom cockpit

making it warm, making it sacred, making it real,

I grasped the wooden spoon joystick and flew

long low passes swooping over the enclosure

checking the forever perimeter that held us all.

 

 

 

 

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◄ Summer '74

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Hazel ettridge

Thu 5th Apr 2018 20:11

Love the intimacy of the imagery and some really rich language that made the whole poem warm, sacred and real.

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Laura Taylor

Thu 5th Apr 2018 16:19

A goodly chunk of gorgeousness. Sonorous and resonant, with a proper delightful scene of play. Loved it.

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