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The Void is Cast

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Whether it was going to an all boys' school,

Growing up in a religious subculture,

Having parents that didn't let you develop

Or provided no template for living

 

Say you are one of those guys that missed out

On intimacy in your teenage years

How do you ever recover?


Laying in bed lonely for all those nights.

Not even having dates with girls your age.

No girlfriend.
 

Now you're an adult

It's over, it's done.

 

The void is cast.

 

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Nigel Astell

Mon 16th Apr 2018 14:57

If one was to share these thoughts with other boys
perhaps then not so lonely on your bodybuilding bed.

<Deleted User> (18980)

Sun 15th Apr 2018 19:30

Oh, sorry John...I misunderstood

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John F Keane

Sun 15th Apr 2018 18:11

No, all completely my own poetic work; only the sentiments come from the online discussion.

<Deleted User> (18980)

Sun 15th Apr 2018 14:51

So it's not original by you then John?

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John F Keane

Sun 15th Apr 2018 13:43

Nothing especially profound: the poem was just culled from a post on an American bodybuilding site to highlight a feature of the human condition.

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Rich

Sun 15th Apr 2018 09:42

Really well put, I think. But the void is not cast.

Talk. That pain can be healed; nothing is insurmountable. You have to do it, and you can.

<Deleted User> (18980)

Sun 15th Apr 2018 08:27

I disagree. The die needn't be cast. Get out and do something about it. Or sit there feeling sorry for yourself.

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