Onionmint
Witheld by fate oercoming anxiety,
more pleasure more pain is what I face in this society
Displayed feelings of sadness, struggling to decieve
Struggling to understand what I have come to believe
Creative decisions to please, staying within this favour
Getting down low to my knees bowing out to the savior
It's what I have to do, burning flames desired
paradigm makes sense now provided knowledge gets me wired
Roots witholding information
fruits bleeding with pungence
Bearing a name in this nation
Showing realms of madness with redundance
Big Sal
Tue 17th Apr 2018 22:08
Don't forget the 'V' in overcoming (unless it was intentional), first line. Otherwise good piece.