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Only Scratching the Surface

Sharp blade cuts I panic

Trying to get past them

The problem solving never wrong

I told you so people.

They ask too many questions

◄ On a Fool's Errand

When Two Smiles Meet Up ►

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Nigel Astell

Wed 9th May 2018 14:27

Thanks Andy I like the short and sharp!

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Andy N

Sun 6th May 2018 12:24

short and sharp Nigel (not sure whether sharp should be here however - lol). Good piece thou, buddy. Enjoyed ?

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Nigel Astell

Wed 25th Apr 2018 14:49

Thanks for your kind words of encouragement Douglas.

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Douglas MacGowan

Tue 24th Apr 2018 16:38

A lot of emotion in a relatively short poem. I think you did a good job here.

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