Dog and insect
. Original Japanese Basho Haiku. The Creator of Haiku.
. Dog running
. Insect swoops close
Jaws snap
Original Haiku was pictographs, not words. Weatern Translations use words, and western rules on number of lines and sylables. Which Hijacks Basho poetry then completely transforms the entire form , message, and depth of thought. Some people may think ' so what ' But POETS won't.
terry l shuff
Fri 18th May 2018 16:07
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