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The Boy and The Sea

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From his window he would look to the sea,
a daily, an every moment sea,
of spring and neap tides,
slave of the moon and wind,
mirror of the skies.

By the shore, where the waves come to die,
he dipped his toes
raised his eyes…And he walked
to where it touches the sky,
so he could the birth of waves feel,
into the sea, towards the open sea.

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Xoanxo

Mon 21st May 2018 00:48

Thank you Martin! I wish it was me but it's my Argentinian friend Hernan Ruiz, a great guitarist! I am currently taking lessons...
I know what you and Colin mean and that is why this little poem is the first in my poetry book in English, Xoetry 2017 but also in the one I have just published a few week ago in Galician, Imos Indo...

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Martin Elder

Sun 20th May 2018 15:11

Another marvellous piece of poetry. I agree with Colin in that this could be longer but maybe that is just me wanting more. I am left wondering was it you playing the guitar accompanying the poem?

Nice one

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Xoanxo

Sat 19th May 2018 09:52

Thank you Colin! I guess it wouldn't be too good if it was the other way round ?!

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Sat 19th May 2018 08:12

my only problem with your poetry Xoanxo is that you leave me wanting more verses! But I'll take what I can get for now. Have a good weekend. Colin.

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