I watched you working
Treading carefully through
The forgotten orders
Excusing your colleague’s forgetfulness
You had a youthful beauty
But your eyes looked older
Than what your body gave away
Forgive me for writing this
But your smile seemed genuine
And that caught my eye
I liked that.
<Deleted User> (13762)
Sun 20th May 2018 10:16
a genuinely lovely poem Jon and your appreciation for this person obviously shines through. I feel like writing similar poems when I get excellent service from anyone showing politeness, friendliness and a good work ethic. I have come across so many slackers in my time that my heart positively jumps out my chest when I see someone who can actually do their job well and efficiently. Good honest writing - I'm enjoying reading your poetry this morning. Cheers, Colin.
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Jon Stainsby
Mon 21st May 2018 22:13
Thank you, Colin.