Preying on and crushing new life
with your supernatural talent
Sweet and comforting words
fill the air
for the unsuspecting
defiling the young
with your two thousand year old dick
they, who do not dare question your authority
too young, too innocent
taking advantage of the naive
in your nave
Your hell is too good for you.
Jon,
Your words in this brief poem are concise and well constructed. Why should hell have to tolerate such vile people. Well done and thank you.
Keith
Thank you, Colin.
<Deleted User> (13762)
Sun 20th May 2018 10:09
a powerful piece Jon which, if put to a poll, might receive equal for and against votes. Any democracy that allows freedom of speech is precious indeed and I think you have communicated your thoughts well in this piece. Col.
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Jon Stainsby
Mon 21st May 2018 22:11
Thank you all for your kind words. They mean so much to me.