Comma Dilemma
I am a poet learning
A poet in progress
Learning alliteration
Learning to assess
I have my eyesight set on
A rhymic peak I see
Maybe I'll never get there
At least not rapidly
I poet that I know of
Said it could take a year
For her to sign a poem off
As happy to her ear
Oscar Wilde – all morning
Spent taking out a comma
Then all the 'noon restoring it -
A wildish kind of drama
Like Wilde I have frustrations
Right words don't come about
Where do the bloody commas go
Where do I leave them out ?
This poem that I've written
It did not take a year
Now finished – it does satisfy
It's pleasing to the ear
Don Matthews March 2018