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What are words worth?

I wandered lonely in a crowd
Brushing up against shoulders
Colliding with legs
but feeling distant and alone
hearing no words of apology
only mutterings of annoyance.

I wondered lonely in a crowd
do we notice each other
or are too caught up in ourselves?
Minds a tangled mess of thoughts
A maze leading to who knows where
Losing our way again and again.

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lonely

◄ Hold onto those thoughts

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Jon Stainsby

Mon 28th May 2018 07:26

Thank you, Martin

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Martin Elder

Sun 27th May 2018 15:12

Very cleverly put Jon and a good deal of truth in what you have said here.

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Jon Stainsby

Sat 26th May 2018 12:47

Thanks, Brian

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Sat 26th May 2018 12:23

I like the subtle shift from 'wandered' to 'wondered' Jon.

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