from the darkness they step
as the light simmers with heat
silhouettes harsh like
statues against the glare
feracious Streets hum,
low pitched as
figures flow, stirring the neon air
shrill notes scatter, wildly
piercing before they fly
vaulting high into the night
Harbingers of death
as the night turns to hell
Tue 5th Jun 2018 12:16
Hi Damon, thank you for your comments on my poetry. They are very much appreciated. I do read and admire a lot of your poetry too. So just keep on writing, it’s the only way to develop and enhance your own style.
All the best Des
Desmond I look up to most on this platform. If I could make poems half as good as you god that would be great.
Sun 3rd Jun 2018 17:20
Thank you Martin your comments are appreciated. Thank you Jon and anya for the likes.
All the best des
You have caught a microcosm of street life beautifully here in a few short but well placed words
Nice one Desmond
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DESMOND CHILDS
Tue 5th Jun 2018 12:17
Thanks for the like Col
All the best des