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Requital

A Bark Scorpion is caught in a trap.

I look at it

and behold the pain in

the lateral eyes of the yellow arachnid.

Its convulsive movements

freeze my steps.

I release the trap and step back.

It approaches me

and stings on my foot

Yes scorpions sting.

That's their way

of demonstrating gratitude.

🌷(2) 

â—„ Silhouettes

Desolation â–º

Comments

Big Sal

Tue 19th Jun 2018 20:09

My uncle was stung on his foot by a scorpion - even though he did not try to help it. Interesting piece.?

<Deleted User> (18980)

Tue 5th Jun 2018 21:53

That'll teach you! You can't help some scorpions...or people.

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