Accident on Tonight's Street.
Footpath frozen
Open - windowed
Let the cold wind in
On this concrete evening.
Brightest shadow
Light revealing
Glint of glass on frost.
Road made of thunder.
Distant driver
Quiet and tired
Approaching quickly
Ten seconds from terror.
Awkward stumble
Car rotating
Spinning confusion
knowledge of injury
A tree receives
In wide - spined glee
A man in the air
From through the front windscreen.
Face first impact
The rest follow
Crashes forwardly
Body now on the curb.
Stream of rose red
Liquid leaking
Pours on path like paint
In perfect profusion.
Silent again
On Tonight's street
Smell of fate and smoke
I close the window shut.
Jeff Dawson
Sat 23rd Jan 2010 22:58
Hi Kealon, fine writing as always, matter of fact as it is in this situation, love the last stanza, Jeff