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The Oyster

The love in you seeps out

And spreads like dye

Bringing colour to every life it touches

You think you need love, but no,

You are already overflowing with it

You give it freely and generously on these pages

Each word a pearl.

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◄ Almost a Prayer

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Hazel ettridge

Wed 13th Jun 2018 22:06

Thank you.

<Deleted User> (16099)

Wed 13th Jun 2018 21:52

this is the best..... thank you

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Don Matthews

Tue 12th Jun 2018 15:55

Depends what you're beholding. I see no beauty in beholding fake plastic flowers.

D ?

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Hazel ettridge

Tue 12th Jun 2018 10:24

Graham, does it matter? Beauty in the eye of the beholder etc.

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Graham Sherwood

Mon 11th Jun 2018 13:49

Ah! I see Hazel, but are they real, fake or cultivated?

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Hazel ettridge

Mon 11th Jun 2018 11:03

Graham - each word a pearl.

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Graham Sherwood

Mon 11th Jun 2018 10:31

Hazel, I’m intrigued by the title?

<Deleted User> (18980)

Mon 11th Jun 2018 10:29

Hazel - I'm bursting with something but it's not divinity!

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Hazel ettridge

Mon 11th Jun 2018 10:28

Brian, I was laughing out loud when I wrote that reply (just in case the tone was ambiguous).

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Don Matthews

Mon 11th Jun 2018 10:22

Hazel - Brian saw the last line and thought it was about him. Can't blame him for trying ?

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Hazel ettridge

Mon 11th Jun 2018 08:50

Brian, the love you share is of a very particular kind. More 'man hug' than 'let me look into your eyes and see the divinity within'. Although I'm sure you are bursting with divinity In your own special way.

<Deleted User> (18980)

Mon 11th Jun 2018 08:44

This isn't about me is it?

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