dust lust.....
standing next two you on a mantle piece longing to touch you...
being stuck on a plack glued so tight
trying with all my might...
but its no use...
time passes by...
gathering dust without any lust!
(c)2009 jeff.w
Comments
defo thinking your stuff is changing gears jeff.. keep it up!
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Jeff Dawson
Sat 23rd Jan 2010 23:17
Hi Jeff, just catchin up but said I would comment! Definitely some promising lines here, this poem showing more maturity in your writing.
just be careful with spelling, it detracts from good work - first line 'to' not 'two' and it's spelt 'plaque' mate, hope thats okay cheers Jeff