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The hunter and rose deer

For years i have watched your shadow in the stars
As swiftly as a deer and recklessly beautiful

How soft and pale is the roundings of your delicate soul,
reaching beyond the restless crowd

A touch of flame rising in my heart, as your rose eyes meet mine

But never have i felt your skin against mine
and the burning of you flame inviting me to your heart

but i will dream of you oncemore
                and wait for you as a hunter for a rose deer

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Flame hunter rose deer

◄ Everblooming Rose

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Amj

Thu 19th Jul 2018 10:19

Thanks guys!

Big Sal

Thu 19th Jul 2018 02:26

Your similes in the first and last lines really draw power to this piece in ways that normal poetic diction cannot. Well done, that's for sure.?

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suki spangles

Sun 24th Jun 2018 05:01

Hi Arina,

Ah, the yearnings of the heart. Beautifully composed.

Cheers,
Suki

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