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Fallen angel

Hidden behind the corpulent clouds
sat all forlorn a fallen angel
Tears in her eyes, and a heavy heart
she stared down to the sphere below.

"I have hurt the ones I love.
Let me be cast down to hell
where I am best suited for dying
and the dead"

Poking her head up from behind her misery
she gazed on this shadowed vision.
Reflecting on piercing her thoughts
with a sharp wit and laden tongue
she smiled a drifting river
and floated away into the oblivion
that had become her existance.

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Jon Stainsby

Sun 24th Jun 2018 12:25

Hi Brian, this is the god of the old testament and there are no second chances. ?

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Sun 24th Jun 2018 12:21

Jon - you can't leave it there or I won't be able to get through the day. How had she let people down? It must have been something very serious. Surely even Heaven has a discipline procedure that starts with, say, a verbal warning rather than going straight to the ultimate punishment?

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