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Space

Space?

I open the door and turn the key,

I call out your name, and my echo answers me.

 

I look at the four walls and they stare back at me,

I wonder what they think, what do they see

 

I look at the teddy bear you gave to me,

I wonder what he thinks, what does he see.

 

I look at the ring you gave to me,

I wonder can it still fit, should I try to see.

 

I look at the clock that made you always hurry me,

I wonder what does time think, what does time see

 

I look at the bed that you slept on with me,

Can it feel the difference, can it see.

 

I look at the photo of you and me,

Can a picture know,can it see.

 

I look into the mirror and I long to see,

If you will appear and look back at me.

 

I hear your voice and I turn to see,

But no one is there, it is only me.

"I belive in love and all it stands for." MayahRose?

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Comments

Big Sal

Mon 6th Aug 2018 02:01

I like how you end your pieces with the quote, "I believe in love and all that it stands for." Something never to be wasted.

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Mayah ROSE

Thu 19th Jul 2018 22:08

Thank you Anya?

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Mayah ROSE

Thu 19th Jul 2018 21:26

Thanks again Jane really appreciate it?

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Thu 19th Jul 2018 21:23

A very nice poem; I especially like the last two lines. Bravo!

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