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Drowning

'Drowning'

I'm drowning and you won't help, 

I beg for help but

you leave me!

As I cry and drown in my own tears,

you just watch me! 

Why won't you help me? 

Help, help me please! 

I need you! 

I can't get out by myself, 

I need you to help me like you always did.

What am I going to do WITHOUT you? 

I pray and ask God to keep 

you by my side, 

but every prayer goes unanswered....

Please come back 

and save me from 

DROWNING! 

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Comments

Niecey_Luv

Tue 7th Aug 2018 02:20

Thank you Big Sal! That means a lot to me.

Big Sal

Mon 6th Aug 2018 02:12

You'll do fine.

Very emotive of regretful repose wrapped in the juxtaposition of a one-sided conversation.

Good first post, and good luck on the rest of your poetry.?

Niecey_Luv

Mon 6th Aug 2018 02:09

Please be gentle with comments, this is my first time posting my poems! ?

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