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MORNING WALK

Why can't we do it in the road

 

No one likes to step on it

sticks to their soul

hard to get off

at least that's what I'm told

 

Why can't we do it in the road

 

Such a relief

tho brief

very hard to hold

 

Why can't we do it in the road

 

By Lynn Hahn

 

 

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◄ NO HEAT IN THE KISS

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lynn hahn

Thu 9th Aug 2018 01:12

Well actually it was created this morning to ward off cougars and bears on my walk with my dog lol. I have been making up little songs so the wild life does not come and eat us. My dog Beau agreed with the message this little ditty imparts.

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Martin Elder

Wed 8th Aug 2018 21:34

Not sure this quite what John Lennon had in mind about doing it in the road. But none the less as Colin suggests maybe you should produce a white album Lynn

Nice one

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Wed 8th Aug 2018 20:41

is this from your white album of poetry Lynn? I like it.

Big Sal

Wed 8th Aug 2018 18:37

Like an inscription scrawled on an oak - concise and poetic enough to last a lifetime.?

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